No Escape

No Escape
No Escape (1994)

IMDB rating: 5.60

Plot: The year is 2022, prison systems from all over the world are now run by private corporations and have become business. After being sentenced to life imprisonment for the murder of his commanding officer who ordered him to wipe out innocent people. Convicted soldier John Robbins is dumped on the prison island Absolom (after he refused to execute his cell-mate and assaulted the Warden). On Absolom, convicts are put there to either survive or die. Robbins finds the prison island is inhabited by two camps, The Outsiders, tribes of savage prisoners led by the evil Walter Merrick and The Insiders, a community of prisoners living in a fortified village “The Compound” led by The Father. Robbins finds escape from Absolom is impossible, surveillance satellites monitor Absolom and gunships prevent all convicts from escaping from the prison island and The Warden has secretly put a spy on Absolom. Caught up in a feud between the two camps, Robbins is determined to escape from the prison island and finds it is his ultimate challenge as nobody has ever escaped and he agrees to help The Insiders defend “The Compound” from The Outsiders.

i get this movie here No Escape DivX version

Directors: Campbell Martin

Actors: Liotta Ray,Henriksen Lance,Wilson Stuart,Dillon Kevin,O’Connor Kevin J.,Henderson Don,McNeice Ian,Shepherd Jack,Lerner Michael,Hudson Ernie,Kiefel Russell,Logan Brian M.,Chan Cheuk-Fai,Colombani Machs,Argue David,Action,Drama,Sci-Fi,

what do death dreams mean?
ok so i have had a few dreams lately where i actually die in them. my first one wasnt so bad…i cant even remember it properly, but this other one i had–ok so me and a few other people i had never met-plus one of my best friends-were running away from micheal myers-yes that guy from halloween. also not to metion jason voorhees was in it too–the reason of that is because i am a major friday the 13th and halloween fan–anyway–so after a while, all the other people died and it was just down to me and my friend. but we were cornered by the two killers, no one was leaving untill one more person died..and i gave up and let my friend escape. myers was going to kill me but i let jason instead–cuz..y’know, he has a bigger knife and i would die much faster by him. cheesy dream i know lol. but then i turned around and waited for it..my friend started crying and then i felt a sharp-hot pain, i started coughing and choking, then i died. and yes it was one of those dreams when you can actually sort of ‘feel’ it. then i woke up…and fell back asleep again..the next dream was of me going to heaven and my family was there..waiting for me..and there not even dead ;S anyway-that was that one, the other one i had the other night was of me dying with my family again. why do i keep dying in my dreams? and why with my family all the time? also why did that first one feel so real? does anyone know what death in dreams mean? i dont know if i should pay attention to them or not :S


lay off the scary movies kid
The Understanding Wiccan )O( | Feb 05, 2010


they mean nothing
God's servant | Feb 05, 2010


Death generally doesn’t mean the real death but on the contrary , it means the opposite like long life or the end of a problem
death is interpreted as solving a problem.If one died in the dream then was alive means he will have a long life.
bolero of fire | Feb 05, 2010


it means it a dream
mg

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Rob Roy

Rob Roy
Rob Roy (1995)

IMDB rating: 6.80

Plot: In the highlands of Scotland in the 1700s, Rob Roy tries to lead his small town to a better future, by borrowing money from the local nobility to buy cattle to herd to market. When the money is stolen, Rob is forced into a Robin Hood lifestyle to defend his family and honour.

Directors: Caton-Jones Michael

Actors: Neeson Liam,Hurt John,Roth Tim,Stoltz Eric,Keir Andrew,Cox Brian,McCardie Brian,Martin Gilbert,Gilchrist Gilly,Flemyng Jason,Stewart Ewan,Hayman David,McArthur Brian,Action,Biography,Drama,Romance,War,

Am I allowed to wish all the regular contributers a Very Merry Christmas and a Prosperous New Year!?
Can I wish all the regular contributers who over the past year have made my life a pleasure with their humour and forthright comments.
Rob Roy,Old Grumpy,Mr.Sceptic,Mr.Sceptic’s Mum,Old Know all,Mr.Sheepie,Foxy,Ray from the USof A and how could I miss my old sparring partner Beastie.And all of the others too numerous to mention.
Happy Christmas guys and a Prosperous New year!


Thank you very much, Robert.

A very Happy Christmas and a peaceful New Year to you.

EDIT: Do you ever think that you get ‘thumbs down’ from some people before they even read what you’ve said?

You have a Merry Christmas too, Sparky!

Mr Sceptic | Dec 18, 2009


Sure, I’ll allow it. I’m a regular. Anyway, backatcha!
goodluckwithhat | Dec 18, 2009


Trolls don’t celebrate Christmas.
Studbolt X | Dec 18, 2009


Happy Christmas to you
JOHN H | Dec 18, 2009


NO! DON’T! All the Christmas haters out there will have you pilloried! Hey, wait…. That sounds kind of kinky; I’m in! Merry Christmas!
psycho_steve | Dec 18, 2009


You certainly can.
Winter Solstice, the shortest day in the year, has been around for millennia.
It’s real.
So, Winter Solstice season is obviously the perfect time to wish good luck to everyone who’s a friend, or even friendly. Like the regulars on Y/A.
Merry Winter Solstice to you also!
Robert David M | Dec 18, 2009


Im a regular !!! sure go for it ! Merry xmas
Sparky | Dec 18, 2009


merry Christmas and a happy new year to you too! May God Bless You.
sam h | Dec 18, 2009


I’m a regular, a regular Christmas hater, sod Christmas and anything to do with it because religion is the curse of fools and has held back civilisation for millenia, i’m having eight on Christmas day and we are having turkey !
nimrod | Dec 19, 2009


Only behind closed doors in case you offend the Muslims.

ATB Red

All the best to and a happy Christmas to all——— Red

and a Special merry Christmas to my old mate Scep.
Redmonk | Dec 19, 2009


By all means wish it, but unless they are bankers it will not be a prosperous new year. We can at least all get very merry and forget about the 20teens.
amtrun | Dec 19, 2009


You can indeed - and a happy Christmas to you too and a ludicrous New Year.
Lorne | Dec 19, 2009

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Faith of My Fathers

Faith of My Fathers
Faith of My Fathers (2005)

IMDB rating: 6.60

Plot: The story of John McCain’s experience as a Vietnam War POW. Base on the memoir of the same title.

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Directors:

Actors: Madell Thomas,Smith Gary Michael,Arata Michael,Beasley Dale,Bentley Tony,Bossetta Brian,Burns William,Cambise Jude,Chrest Joe,Dupuy Louis,Durkin Brian F.,Evermore J.D.,Galpin Jeff,Glenn Scott,Gomez Nick,Biography,Drama,War,

believe me,son of our lord,God….why didnt God creat us with belief?
there are alot of phrase with believe believe me,son of the man,lord,god,your father and so on

i know god is omnipotent and so he’s able to instill or put kinda belief chip in our brain,soul whatever
then we could constantly keep the strong faith and glorify God

here’s my question
then why DIDNT he make us with belief???

is it just because of FREE WILL that he wants to get the glory by our own volunteering or proactive mind?
is there more reasons why he did so?


He gave us the ability to believe. To me that’s enough.
Mpenda Yesu | Feb 06, 2010


Because God didn’t create us to begin with.
Planck Epoch | Feb 06, 2010


It’s because He wants all people that do believe to build strong Godly morals. It’s ones Choice!! to live a life without God or a life of righteousness.
MaxaTron | Feb 06, 2010


Because we didn’t invent him yet.
Rev. Michael S. Margolin | Feb 06, 2010


Free will!

Why doesn’t God reveal himself physically?

Because we would be so overwhelmed by his presence we would have no choice but to worship him.

It’s ok, thus your an atheist!

God doesn’t force people to believe and worship him. If you want to be by yourself in your ath / evo phylum, then so be it.

It’s freewill…your will is not to believe, thus you distance yourself from God…it’s fine! God doesn’t want pre-programed robots, he wants people that honestly seek and ask him to reveal himself in THEIR lives.

Humans are made in his image, and that includes our desire for genuine love. God wants his children to genuinely love him. God didn’t create us to have no choice but to bow to him.

What kind of God would create people to just bow to him?

That would be a malevolent God who creates people to do what he wants them to do…a kind of slavery wouldn’t you think?

So…since there are atheists around, that eliminates a God being a supernatural bully then.

Why all the hate, strife, and death in the Old Testament and New Testaments?

Because humanity is full of turds that can’t get anything right! Humanity brought all the wrath’s of God upon themselves!

How is God love?

Because he is plural in divinity, and yes, he choose to send a person of himself to endure humanity to atone for the sin of humanity! All one has to do is believe in him and have faith, thus they will be saved from DEATH because upon physical death they are still very much alive. As a matter of fact, they are spiritually alive forever.

If you don’t want a part of it, that’s fine! If you can’t wrap your mind around an invisible God, FINE!

Humanity simply doesn’t "GET" that everything can’t be figured out! Everybody jockeys to get to the position of "the best renown" in their field of profession, only to flip on the TV one day and find that their theory has trumped by Joe schmuck’s discovery of the

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Missionary Man

Missionary Man
Missionary Man (2007)

IMDB rating: 5.00

Plot: A mysterious biker arrives in a small town in an Indian reservation for the funeral of his friend J.J. and discovers through his family that he was murdered by the men of the powerful John Reno. The corrupt businessman plans to build a casino in association with criminals from the North in the town and J.J. opposed to his intentions offering a better option to the locals. The lone vigilante decides to stay in town with his bible and drinking straight tequila and like an avenging angel, bring justice to people.

Directors: Lundgren Dolph

Actors: Lundgren Dolph,Tompkins Matthew,Montoya John D.,Chalke James,Enos III John,Varnado Lawrence,Solomon Jr. Charles,Cruz Jonny,Schellenberg August,Imes Brad,Guevara Julian,Stevens Andrew,Action,Drama,Western,

If we discover intelligent life outside earth. How will Christians explain "God created man in his image"?
Will the Jehovah Witness send white shirted,black tied missionaries in a spaceship to this planet to convert them .


Religions have come across worse issues many times before.

We now know that the Earth revolves around the Sun, yet Judaism and Christianity survive. Joseph Smith has been shown to be a scam artist with no real knowledge of Egyptian heiroglyphics, yet there are still Mormons. Most religions can be traced back to earlier myths, yet they survive. There are even still some cargo cults around.

Religions are very good at adapting. They are based on emotional hooks, not evidence. Therefore, evidence will not harm them much. They’ll just cherry-pick different verses and re-interpret others then claim that’s what they meant all along.
nondescript | Feb 06, 2010


I’ll bet my life that they’ll try. I hope it happens in my lifetime so I can hear about how the Aliens ate the missionaries and I can laugh myself to death.
Return of Wonder Weirdo | Feb 06, 2010


God created man in his image. So man (Adam) looked like God. God never said he made aliens in his image so I wouldn’t see a problem with that.
Exodiafinder | Feb 06, 2010


We’ll cross that bridge when we get to it!

Fox Mulder

;-) Muldah | Feb 06, 2010


They’ll ignore it like evolution.
Mortal Chortle | Feb 06, 2010


Simple. There won’t be any men on that planet. Only women.

Oh man I can’t wait for them to find that planet.
Sam | Feb 06, 2010


There is no life beyond earth.

God created earth first and then the rest of the universe. Mankind is the centre of God’s attention.
chas_chas_123 | Feb 06, 2010


Why would finding sentient life out side of Earth effect any Christian doctrine? There is no scripture that states God didn’t create other life forms elsewhere. How will atheists react if the aliens come with white shirted,black tied missionaries?
PROBLEM JPAS A.R.T. | Feb 06, 2010


What if we don’t? Would you believe the Bible?
Steel Rain | Feb 06, 2010


western religions are very astute at adapting their rhetoric so as to have an answer for everything…though they never face the holes
Unitarian Universalist | Feb 06, 2010


You answered your own question if you actually think logically. Where does it state that he only created ONE man in his image?

Get back to us when you find that ok?
Highway | Feb 06, 2010

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American History X

American History X
American History X (1998)

IMDB rating: 8.40

Plot: A Neo Nazi skinhead, named Derek Vineyard (Edward Norton) goes to jail for 3 years after committing a murder of 2 black guys. In the meanwhile, his younger brother, Danny Vineyard (Edward Furlong) goes in the same way and makes the same mistakes (racism and hatred) his eldest brother did (this is the result of the Neo Nazi environment he grows up into, and the influence Derek left behind). While Derek is in jail he realize that he choose the wrong path. after coming back from jail, Derek try to convince his brother not to go in his own way.

Directors: Kaye Tony

Actors: Norton Edward,Furlong Edward,Brooks Avery,Suplee Ethan,Keach Stacy,Gould Elliott,Torry Guy,Russ William,Cortese Joseph,Smith Jason Bose,Lyons Antonio David,Sol Alex,Crime,Drama,

What happened to the Native American Indians and Aztecs?
Ive got some history homework and cant find anything about why they disappeared or something, any help? its to help with an assessment.
Cheers everyone!! x
or like what happened to them coz im confuzzed, thanks x
thanks guys x
i have never learnt about u people before so i dont know!! my omework assignment was to find out what happened to them, not get told i was a retard by one of them!!


we have not disappeared.

we are still here. alive and living our culture and following our beliefs.

http://www.dickshovel.com/500.html

you will find out the attempts to make us disappear. good thing they failed.

Kanien:kaha'ka-[]-[]-^-[]-[] | Mar 03, 2010


They have not disappeared. Their ancient cities are still seen, but the people moved on. The descendants of both are alive and well and have melded into their respective countries.

The cave dwelling Native Americans are now in modern cities and reservations.
daisy | Mar 03, 2010


They still exist. I am here writing you right now. Most Mexican people are of "Aztec" genetics and culture albeit due to colonization by Europe many now call themselves by the misnomers of Latino or Hispanic. In actuality the Spanish-European elements are minimal, but there have been and continue to be campaigns promoting the European element go keep the colonizers structure and efforts in place.
Quimich | Mar 03, 2010


What happened to Native Americans? Disappeared? Are you retarded? LOL WTF is that school teaching you? You poor thing….

I’m a full blooded Oglala Lakota Native…… HI
Lakota Dream | Mar 03, 2010

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This Is England

This Is England
This Is England (2006)

IMDB rating: 8.00

Plot: Roland Rat, Margaret Thatcher; Rubik’s Cubes, the Royal Wedding; aerobics, skinheads… It’s 1983, and the schools are breaking up for summer. Shaun is 12 and a bit of a loner, growing up with his mum in a grim coastal town, his dad killed fighting in the Falklands War. On his way home from school where he’s been tormented all day for wearing flares, he runs into a group of skinheads, who against expectations turn out to be friendly and take him under their wing. Soon Shaun discovers parties, girls and snappy dressing, and finds some role models in Woody, Milky and the rest of the gang. But when an older, overtly racist skinhead returns home from prison, the easy camaraderie of the group is broken, and Shaun is drawn into much more uncomfortable territory. Based largely on his own experience as a youngster, this is Shane Meadows’ most mature and fully realised film. Handling the complexities of masculinity, violence and race with sensitivity and a lightness of touch, it’s hard to imagine a film that would better capture the mood of the time, or that could have any greater an understanding of the allure of being part of a gang.

This Is England

Directors: Meadows Shane

Actors: Turgoose Thomas,Graham Stephen,Shim Andrew,Gilgun Joseph,Ellis Andrew,Benson Perry,Newton George,Harper Frank,O’Connell Jack,Dosanjh Kriss,Hardcastle Kieran,Drama,

dad problems need help?
hi im 15 i live in england with my mum, my dad lives in ireland with his wife and 5 children he had with her. I have 13, 10 and 1 year old brothers and a 3 year old sister. My dad divorced from my mum around the time when she was pregnant with me. Anyways my dad rarely calls me and never sends anything on my birthdays or on christmas. He didnt tell me about my sister untill she was one and my youngest brother untill he was 6 months old. Once i was at his and on my birthday he chose to go to the pub instead of seeing me.

About 5 months ago he came to my local area but didnt tell me or visit me and one month later he did it again accept that time it was to go to my grandfathers funeral he didnt invite me and i wasnt even told that he died. Recemtly i found out my grandmother is dying of cancer, i was never told about that either. Ive had an argument with my dad and he said i was the biggest mistake hes ever made and he called me a failure. My mum dosent want to get involved in all of this

Im deressed and i self harm, i dont want to wake up in the mornings, ive overdosed on sleeping pills and was dissapointed to wake up. I hate myself and my life i just want to die. Im a stupid mistake wish i had never been born.I have no one to talk to and i feel lonely all the time. I cant take anymore im so angry and sad i cant explain how i am feeling its to much for me. what can i do

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Sudden Death

Sudden Death
Sudden Death (1995)

IMDB rating: 5.10

Plot: The Vice-President is being held at gunpoint. The Pittsburgh Civic Arena is wired with enough explosives to blow up the whole city. And if $1 billion isn’t delivered soon, thousands will die… …Darren McCord is in the arena. An arson investigator, he’s seen what explosives can do to people. And he won’t let it happen again. Because this time, one wrong move and his daughter dies, too…

Directors: Hyams Peter

Actors: Van Damme Jean-Claude,Boothe Powers,Barry Raymond J.,Malinger Ross,Harewood Dorian,Gaston Michael,Delate Brian,Aronson Steve,Aubele Michael R.,Brisson Pat,Action,Drama,Thriller,

how to start a story for the nightmare bit in ancient mariner.?
I need some help on what to write about, i don’t know how the story of the ancient mariner goes (the nightmare part, with DEATH)

so far, my planning is….

Beginning - Old sailor on a boat, people shouting, all of a sudden the bride walks in with DEATH!

Middle - People start screaming and the bride kisses Death by mistake and dies. Death starts killing people one by one.

End - sailors and wedding guests blame it on the old sailor because he gambled with death ( If death wins, EVERYONE on the ship will die, if old sailor wins, death dies)!

Please HELP !!!
x

P.S
ALSO, 10 POINTS TO ANYONE THAT ANSWERS
THANKSSS
x

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Lock Up

Lock Up
Lock Up (1989)

IMDB rating: 5.40

Plot: Frank Leone is nearing the end of his prison term for a relatively minor crime. Just before he is paroled, however, Warden Drumgoole takes charge. Drumgoole was assigned to a hell-hole prison after his administration was publicly humiliated by Leone, and has now arrived on the scene to ensure that Leone never sees the light of day.

Directors: Flynn John

Actors: Stallone Sylvester,Sutherland Donald,Amos John,Landham Sonny,Sizemore Tom,McRae Frank,Young William Allen,Romano Larry,Lund Jordan,Lilla John,Duval Dean,Strivelli Jerry,Marshall David Anthony,Ashley Kurek,Action,Adventure,Crime,Drama,Thriller,

so i was working in the lab one nite,(nik) and i awoke to a big fright?
one of my workers, nathan condamn accidently spilt over a vat of our patened toxic milk, so i assumud(jackson) that we had a zombie apidamnic on our hands. i said to him "MILK SHOULDNT HAVE TO PICK ITSELF UP WOMAN!" so i haed him clean it all op with him mop, and shoovele. but i had thean realised that when i sent him to claen(oxi)(billy mays)(dead)(risisng)(eraction)(mom)(a d’s)(chasty morguun)(capcom)(zumbies)(lock picking)(the bruce)(theft)(auto)(failed driving tast)(the bruce) op the mass, i an condeening him to bee(movie) a zombie 4 life(tee hee) so i ralised what i has to do…….choop off his had. and mako suro he stais dead.(4 ledt) so i had mai boi eustice jackson kill him wih a swift(taylor) karate choop 2too the head(god i want some) but when he caldnt i had too, but i had to fight mah wai thru waves and wavses of my employies that were also infarcted, but they werent acting like zombies by not attacking or caring about me, chacky basterds. so i finally found him and kalled his head off his shalders

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Something’s Gotta Give

Something's Gotta Give
Something’s Gotta Give (2003)

IMDB rating: 6.80

Plot: Harry Langer (Nicholson) is an aged music industry exec with a fondness for younger women like Marin (Peet), his latest trophy girlfriend. Things get a little awkward when Harry suffers a heart attack at the home of Marin’s mother Erica (Keaton). Left in the care of Erica and his doctor (Reeves), a love triangle starts to take shape.

Directors: Meyers Nancy

Actors: Reeves Keanu,Nicholson Jack,Favreau Jon,Glaser Paul Michael,Romance,Comedy,Drama,

what can i bake with these ingredients?
from a fail blondie experiment (they came out too dark i guess because i used dark brown sugar instead of light and mixed chocolate chips in which ended up melting but they still tasted good regardless) what can i make with these ingredients so i can use them up and have them not go bad in my pantry? ( i enjoy baking but i dont have alot of time due to working and school. luckily thanks to the snow storm ive found myself alot of time :p)

dark brown sugar (alot)
baking powder (alot)
flour (i just need to get rid of it so i can get a new bag)
plain white granulated sugar (again just gotta get rid of it)
raspberry preservatives (i used it for cheesecake topping and again need to get rid of it)

maybe a scone recipe or again anything im willing to try something new :)


water.
Live. It's all you can do. | Feb 07, 2010


To make anything with those ingredients, you’d need eggs and milk and butter or oil as well. Then you could make cake or donuts, and spread the raspberry preserves on them.
Joanne | Feb 07, 2010


if you have butter and eggs you could make thumbprint cookies.
Brian | Feb 07, 2010


None of the things you listed go bad if stored correctly. I wish I had the luxury of tossing things out just so I could get a new one.
Lisa | Feb 07, 2010


It is always useful to have baking powder, flour, and sugar. I mean, They are basic kitchen essentials.
KingMan | Feb 07, 2010


Agree, those are basic supplies that stores long, and you will want to always have them in your kitchen! They usually keep for up to a year.

If you don’t have much time to bake, then make pancakes for weekend brunches. I go with about one cup of flour, 3/4 cup of milk, 1/2 cup of melted butter, one egg, dash salt, a tablespoon white or brown sugar, 3 tablespoons baking powder.

Raspberry preserves usually go on top of pancakes after frying, but if you like to give the batter an interesting pink colour you might like to mix about 3-4 spoonfuls in the batter. Then you can either use some more on top of the pink pancakes, or roll the pancakes in dark brown sugar topping. If you like, you can also make thinner pancakes by adding more milk.

If you make 2-3 batches, you can invite friends over for a pancake party. It will be an inexpensive way to treat your friends and have a fun afternoon together, and your ingredients will run out fast.
Mizz G | Feb 07, 2010


Refined flour only keeps for about 8 months. It can go bad.
shelf life of baking powder last 3 to 6 months.

You can use the brown sugar to make candied yams or carrots.
Just add 1/4 cup of butter to the sauce pan open can of yams or carrots and pour in a cup of brown sugar. It will make a sweet syrup like broth.

If the flour is still good and baking soda

pan cakes
Ingredients
1 1/2 cups all-purpose flour
3 1/2 teaspoons baking powder
1 teaspoon salt
1 tablespoon white sugar
1 1/4 cups milk
1 egg
3 table spoons oil or soften butter

Mix all ingredients and fry in hot pan. Splash a little water by flicking you wet finger on pan If it sizzles it is hot enough. Put a little oil in pan a pour small amount in pan. When edges start to dry a little and some of the holes left from bubbles do not close it is time to flip with spatula.

When don remove from pan to plate and spoon on raspberry preserves and eat any time of day is OK.

3 cups all purpose flour (more or less, as needed)
1/2 tsp. salt
1 cup butter, softened (2 sticks)
1 cup sugar
1 large egg
2 tsp. vanilla or almond extract

Stir together flour and salt and set aside.
Mix sugar into the butter.
Then add the rest of the ingredients.
Divide into four portions and refrigerate for an hour.
Flour a flat surface and roll out dough to about a 1/4 inch thick after it had sometime out of the refrigerator.
Use cookie cutter or glass to cut out cookies from the dough.
Bake on cookie sheet at 350 10 to 15 minutes.
Alan D | Feb 07, 2010

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Fall, The

Fall, The
Fall, The (2006)

IMDB rating: 8.00

Plot: At a Los Angeles hospital in the 1920s, Alexandria is a child recovering from a broken arm. She befriends Roy Walker, a movie stunt man with legs paralyzed after a fall. At her request, Roy tells her an elaborate story about six men of widely varied backgrounds who are on a quest to kill a corrupt provincial governor. Between chapters of the story, Roy inveigles Alexandria to scout the hospital’s pharmacy for morphine. As Roy’s fantastic tale nears its end, Death seems close at hand.

i find Fall, The and instant download

Directors: Singh Tarsem

Actors: Pace Lee,Pace Lee,Uylenbroek Kim,Lithgow Aiden,Gilder Sean,France Ronald,Roussouw Andrew,Huff Michael,Swanby Grant,Hostina Emil,Hostina Emil,Adventure,Drama,Fantasy,

How should I start my novel?
Julia Moris is a 21 year old PC in the police force. She starts off at a small station in a small villiage in somerset, where she lives with her father and her brother. Her mother died when she was 10 years old when she was stabbed in the street after a night out with friends. Julia also has a sister who is six years older than her, and after their mother died, she moved up to London to start life fresh because she didn’t get on well with her father, and she left Julia behind. Julias father had become abusive towards Julia after her mother died, and her younger brother, Daniel, took after their father and got in trouble a lot because of truency and bullying.

When Julia was sixteen, she was fed up with living with her abusive father, and moved in with her auntie Janice. Julia decided that when she was old enough, she wanted to become a police officer because of what happened to her mother.
The type of crimes that Julia investigated at the small police station were crimes such as fights outside pubs, shoplifting and domestic abuse.
One day, the station are told of a big drugs deal in a close by town are called in to help other stations. Julia is put undercover as a friend of one of the people involved in the drug deal.
After the drugs deal, Julia is offered a transfer to a station in London, so she goes to live with her sister.

When Julia first starts, she befriends PC’s Liam Taylor and Lucinda White, and Seargent Joshua Winters. Julia feels under pressure as she has to investigate crimes such as GBH and ABH, rape, really big drug operations and fraud..
A few months after Julia finds herself in her first ever murder investigation which she finds very hard to cope with, but Liam, Lucinda and Josh all help her get through it.
After the long and difficult muder investigation, Julia and the others go to the local pub, and to cope with the last few stressful days, she gets drunk. Because of being drunk, Julia tries to kiss Joshua but he refuses to kiss her back, the have a huge argument and Julia storms off.
When she is halfway home, Julia decides that she can’t wait to get home that she takes a shortcut through an alleyway. Julia meets two strangers who want to take advantage of her, they fall on the floor and she gets stabbed.

Joshua and Liam find her, and she gets to the hospital and they are told that she is critical. She is in a coma for three days, she then becomes stable and regains conciousnous.

How do you think I should start it???
Julia waking up in the morning?? In the police station?? During an investigation??
What do you think??


During an investigation
Allie | Feb 05, 2010


That’s a pretty good idea.

Start with flashbacks. Julia is having nightmares about her past, then wakes to an annoying alarm and realizes she’s a bit late.
Addy | Feb 05, 2010

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